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Subject: Info Re:Wetlook Story - Der Ausflug neues Kapitel

Date: Mon 02/10/17 01:12:53 GMT

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Hi Bernd,

 

I continue to try to translate these stories into English, I hope you don't mind, I am giving you full credit and linking to your versions.

 

I have had a go at translating the first 6 episodes of https://www.fanfiktion.de/s/59b2c6a70007297e35d9818c/1/Susannes-nasser-Nebenjob,

 

You can find the results here:

 

http://www.savethebergamot.co.uk/mmm/beachdreamer2.html

 

As for feedback: I have really enjoyed this story, though I did find the treatment of Moni in part 5 a little nasty and vindictive. I like reading stories where the participants enjoy getting wet; Moni clearly didn't.

Personally I would have preferred Moni and Susanne to have become reconciled, for instance, once Moni had apologised she could have jumped into the pool voluntarily as an act of contrition.

 

Regards

John

 

 

 

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By Bernd - uu Sat 30/09/17 18:25:04 GMT

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Hallo zusammen. Viel Spaß beim Lesen des neuen Kapitels. Bitte vergesst das Review dort nicht. Dort könnt ihr mir auch mitteilen, ob diese Geschichte noch fortgesetzt werden soll, denn bisher gab es kaum Feedback dazu und kaum jemand hat die Geschichte als Favoriten gespeichert. Von daher habe ich Zweifel, ob sie überhaupt ankommt. LG

 

https://www.fanfiktion.de/s/59cd194b0007297e37b32de9/1/Der-Ausflug-nbsp-eine-weitere-Wetlook-Geschichte

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