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Message # 39140.1 Subject: Re: One story added. Date: Sun 22/02/09 17:11:47 GMT Name: Poliut |
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The biker story, right? I enjoyed the read. Oddly enough when I happened to re-read it with a certain song playing on my laptop, the song actually complemented the story when the two - OK, you two - arrived at the lake, and she started wading in. It made the read even more enjoyable and added to the setting a bit more. I enjoyed the nature of the girl as the proceeded in - step in a little, hesitate, proceed further... It was like she enjoyed it while having reservations at the same time - at least that was the impression I received while reading it. Whether that was the case or not... I guess the reader can fill in the blanks, true or not - as it was a true story after all.
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In reply to Message (39140) One story added.
By siren - mail2siren@yahoo.co.uk Sun 22/02/09 09:17:16 GMT Hey all,
I have added one more story to the page, one I have written myself, hope you like it. It is a true story. If some like it, I have lots more to tell.
I ll add all stories posted to the forum soon. If you do have stories to contribute mail them to me, so that I can upload and get new life into the story page.
Cheers,
Siren
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